In a message dated 2/14/01 3:26:09 AM Eastern Standard Time, pennydreadful@powersurfr.com writes:
<< .I speculate that perhaps Annie means it would be very difficult to accurately transcribe "body language", in comparison to speech, as a means of communication...how
would
you go about writing out the Buster Keaton movie playing in your head
(well
I know *I've* always got one rolling) to make it ROTFL amusing? Better off converting into a more dialogue-oriented format. "'X,' said Y [Z-ly]" gets the point across succinctly, if not always terrifically aesthetically; where a list of Y's bodily contortions (which in real life or a Buster Keaton movie *could* communicate "X, Z-ly" very efficiently) will have the reader skimming ahead for the next period/paragraph break/dirty word. >>
Yes, but in B7, particularly with certain characters, their behavior is certainly more communicative than any bit of dialogue. While I agree that there should be a happy medium, I personally like fiction (fanfic or other) that shows the behavior and lets the reader interpret. I find dialogue that explains everything, particularly motivation, to be implausible and it wrecks the story for me.
Morrigan "When I get a little money I buy zines; and if any is left I buy food and clothes." (apologies to Erasmus)
From: B7Morrigan@aol.com
Yes, but in B7, particularly with certain characters, their behavior is certainly more communicative than any bit of dialogue. While I agree that there should be a happy medium, I personally like fiction (fanfic or
other)
that shows the behavior and lets the reader interpret. I find dialogue
that
explains everything, particularly motivation, to be implausible and it
wrecks
the story for me.
Agreed, but with one rider. If the story says, "Character X did such-and-such, he didn't know why", then that's probably because the author hasn't a clue why X does such-and-such but needs him to do so in order to advance the plot in the right direction.
That was certainly true for me when I tried pulling that stunt. Thankfully it was only in a ghod-awful spy novel I wrote at school when I was about 14. Lots of decrepit old Nazis and KGB agents running around East Africa, with a real Marky-Sam of a birdwatching hero...
Neil