Harriere wrote:
<When Gan discusses the issue with Jenna, they're acquaintances; maybe he
might have opened up more later, but at this point he wishes to give her
only the basic information required.>
They're a reticent crowd, after all. We never hear the names of Blake's
murdered siblings, or Avon's brother; neither those relatives nor Jenna's
mother are ever mentioned again, nor are *any* family/friends of chatterer
Vila. Cally never mentions her clone sister till they're off to Auron;
Tarrant never mentions his brother till faced with his image in DeathWatch,
and the rest of the Tarrant clan is a closed book (which is lovely for
fanfiction, because we can shoehorn Dev in there somehow).
None of the Scorpio crew (except possibly Avon) knew Soolin's history on
Gauda Prime, for all that she'd been with them a year and was friendly with
Dayna.
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"Sally Manton" on why Avon stands over Blake's body wrote:
>
>*Why* triumphant? Not just that I don't see it in his stance, but what has
>he got to triumph about in shooting Blake?
He's free of him at last.
Jenny
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Harriet wrote:
>Jenny wrote:
>>And the fact that he doesn't give her name, or even say "my wife"
>>or "my lover", but "my woman". Creepy.
>
>Not necessarily - I quite like those languages where "my man" and "my
>husband" are expressed by the same words. But in this case, I assume
>that they weren't married, and then you get into the tired old
>what-do-you-call-them thing.
<snip>
To my
>sentimental ears, "my woman" conveys "a woman who was mine - as in, she
>was everything to me, but I don't need to explain that to you, it's too
>private, and you see my meaning". In my personal meandering off-canon,
>the woman was pregnant when she died.
But think about it. "My woman." Not "Sarah," or "Becky," or "Jill"; not
"someone I cared for" or "a woman who meant a lot to me." Very cavemannish
really; it doesn't give her a name or a face or even suggest that there was
anything at all between them.
And, leaving the internal logic of the story aside and seeing it from a
technical standpoint: why would the scriptwriter make her Gan's "woman" and
not Gan's "wife" (which would have been a more effective pathos conveyor and
leave the audience less puzzled)? What is he trying to convey by having Gan
say "my woman"? Even David Jackson, IIRC, thought it was a bit tough and
insensitive-sounding.
Jenny
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I always like a bit of taffy after a critique, so ...
We've done what changes we'd like. Now, would anyone like to give us:
[a] three things about Blake's 7 as a series that make it special for them,
and different from other shows?
[b] if you can think of them, one thing in each of just three episodes that
somehow lifted that episode for you? (For instance, I *know* Kairos is
somewhat dodgy, but I love the portrayal of Avon as single-minded scientist
intent of shuffling the leadership onto Tarrant; it works so well just for
this brief post-War period for me.)
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Jenny wrote:
<Oh, he does act stupid. There's a lot of Gan's actions which are put down
by a lot of people (including the crew) to his being stupid-- not checking
to see if Jenna was behind him on Cephlon, or tearing out the computer banks
in "Breakdown.">
The second instance is an invalid example, IMO, since it could have been
caused by scrambled brain impulses caused by the malfunction. So you have
one example of stupid behaviour (and I could add a second one, the
temper-tantrum-moment with the handcuffs in Bouty when Vila is trying *not*
to blow Blake's head off). But of course <veg> the odd dumb moment is so
*unusual* in our crew. Personally, I consider Blake, Avon, Jenna, Tarrant
and Soolin - at the *least* - to be very bright in their different ways. So
...
Want to ask Avon how he thought sending that message to Servalan (in
Hostage) would help? And why his brain turned off once he went down to
Exbar? Why he turned his back on Sara in MoD? Why in Rescue, when he clearly
didn't trust Dorian, he left his gun in the other room while he took a bath?
Want to ask Tarrant why - after stating very firmly and loudly that he
trusted no one but himself - he swallowed that whole incredibly silly story
from Norl in City? Or why he insisted in DotG that *everyone* goes down with
the ship?
Want to ask Cally why - when she *knew* Gan had tried to throttle Blake -
she *let him go*?
Want to ask Dayna why at the end of Kairos she meekly teleported Servalan to
safety instead of into open space? (oh, and want to ask Servalan why she
decided to trust Dayna with her safety?) Or why - when Avon *told* her in
Powerplay to 'shoot anyone who isn't me', she still managed to get captured
by Klegg's men without even wounding one of them?
Want to ask Blake why he had so much trouble keeping up with the Twinfoil's
explanation in 'The Web'? Why he repeatedly let Travis and/or Servalan live?
Why in MoD he left the unsealed box with an incredibly valuable neutrotope
lying around where at the first bump it would fall?
Want to ask Soolin why she decided to help Tarrant in Warlord, risking the
whole alliance they'd worked for, the security of the base and all of their
lives so he could have his little romantic fling?
Want to ask Vila about that dropped knife in Cygnus Alpha? Or playing the
with loading bay controls on Albion? Or believing Blake's mind-rape-induced
lies in 'Voice'? For that matter (and that episode), want both Avon and
Jenna why - when they *knew* Blake's mind was decidedly awry - when he said
'give the mummy a bracelet', they gave the mummy a bracelet?
(Jenna doesn't have *many* 'where-in-the-world-have-I-put-my-brain' moments,
but she does seem to persistently be several steps behind Avon and Blake
(the dreaded 'what's going on, Blake?' bits) so that they have to explain
things to her - Redemption is especially bad on this point).
Want to ask the whole lot of them why they didn't notice Cally was missing
in SLD???? Or that Jenna *saw* their discarded handcuffs in Bounty and said
nothing???
And that's just the ones I can come up with now.
After all, they're all under incredible stress - under sentence of death,
caught up in a probably unwinnable war, and constantly fighting (sometimes
even the enemy <g>). It would be very surprising if any of them *didn't* act
stupid on occasion. Gan may be more phlegmatic than Avon or Blake or
Tarrant, but that doesn't mean that he doesn't feel stress as well.
After all, speaking as someone whose claims to brilliance are ... errr, yes,
well ... I wouldn't like to claim for for one minute that I'd even do half
as well as he does, let alone better. Not under the circumstances.
Sally
PS - anyone else got any 'maybe-I-should-have-stayed-in-bed' moments they
particularly treasure?
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Marian *did write:
<No, Jenny wrote that :-)>
Oops. Sorry. I'm really better at cutting and pasting when scissors are
involved ...
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Marian wrote:
> ><grin> He nearly didn't, you will notice - Neebrox had to *remind* him
>about his promise.<
>
>Yes, which might indicate he may be less a man of his word than he claims.
>Still, I think he'd want to keep his part of a deal made with Blake.
But in Terminal and Blake, his actions don't have to do with a deal-- the
last deal that he made with Blake was concluded by that point, as Avon got
the Liberator; once a deal's done, Avon isn't generally interested in
anything further (even in holding up his own side of the bargain, unless he
has to), there's no hold over him. Avon does seem to have believed in Blake,
which suggests that a small part of Avon was an idealist. But then, to be a
cynic you have to be an idealist.
Jenny
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Marian wrote:
Although
>well aware about the repercussions her actions will have on Marriott's wife
>and children, she's quite unconcerned about them.
And of all the surgeons she could have chosen, she picks the one whose death
would have an impact on Travis-- she's twisting the knife.
>I'm not sure whether Kasabi really meant that, or if she just said the most
>hurtful thing she could think of.
I think she did mean it. Servalan does not deny that the report was bad, and
if she had to use her connections to get where she was, this suggests that
she did have to overcome a bad report.
Jenny
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Sally wrote:
>He's not stupid. He doesn't act stupid. It's just the company he keeps.
Oh, he does act stupid. There's a lot of Gan's actions which are put down by
a lot of people (including the crew) to his being stupid-- not checking to
see if Jenna was behind him on Cephlon, or tearing out the computer banks in
"Breakdown." But if he's doing these things, and he's not stupid, why is he
doing them?
Jenny
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